The funniest thing one of my friends shouted out while playing mulitplayer was in Halo 1 and he shouted "OMG HE HAS A GUN !!!!". No crap we all have guns. Great flash i'll make sure i don't become a pro gamer.
I have no Idea what just happened
So.......he and his brother are monsters ? But they're in a bathroom ? I still don't get the Story. I suggest you work on your drawings with more care. Possibly use voice actors instead of text.
hes having a flash back if you were paying attention. then a girl who has an intense crush on him appears in the bathroom
Excellent quality of animation
I loved the tween animation at the end with ash and pikachu, it looked really nicely done.
I like wat i see but why am i seeing it ?
The drawings and animation arent too bad. But honestly what possessed you to do a flash about algae in a fish tank ? When i do a flash usualy i see something cool and think "wow thats cool, i could do that". Did u see an Algae in ur fish tank and think "wow thats cool, i could do that" ? If u did then ur meaning of cool is a lot different to my cool, ur cool is like warm or something. Wait i'm supposed to offer constructive critacism well.....
Find something to do a Flash on thats cooler than Algae or possibly some super mutated atomic algae that takes over the world im not picky.
Hope that helps :)
uhm.........as I said......it's school project..............
Needs a bit more work but a nice job none the less
Ok this is constrcuctive critacism dont hate me: First off maybe work on ur voice acting they both sound the same. Next shorten or get rid of the intro credits those annoyed me or even add a scene selection or a skip button. And next try to improve ur character drawings a bit. They both looked a bit boring and dull like maybe add some flashing lights on the robot or stuff that makes him look more robot-ish. I thought he was a walking box at first lol. Hope that helped.
Ok that was a weird 20 seconds
Needs to be longer and be more detailed.
i accually Made ages ago, when i was bad at flash and didnt know what i was doing. i just wanted to submit something for clockday.
Just keeps getting better and Better
Wow this was great. Keep up the awesome work.
Could have been longer.
It was pretty good quality stuff. It just ended too abruptly. We dont even know why this guy is fighting. Also it lacked anything new. You should try making some of your own stuff up for it.
It was ok, more could have happened
A nice movie but i thought it needed a bit more oomph to it. A nice story though.
Wow not bad
Ok you want some constructive critacism ? Well here it is: the tree bark needs more detail on it, maybe shade it a bit. Also the water looked pretty plain, need to add some white streaks to show which way its flowing and maybe add some alpha to it and make it slightly see through and have vague images of fish or the bottom of the water. Finally try to come up with some sort of story for it. Your backgrounds are very good u just need to add something to them to help make it more enjoyable.
Very constructive critacism and a lot of thank yous!
Ill work on more animations in the scenes. Thanks
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